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• Remember that your reader should not have to fill in the blanks to understand how
you reached your conclusion.
• Have a friend or family member read your sample and ask if they were able to
follow the reasoning and/or if any points were unclear.
Ensure any rewrites remain consistent with the analysis.
• If you omit any facts or issues from your sample, ensure they do not appear in
other portions of the document (i.e., brief answers, conclusion sections, question
presented), as this will cause unnecessary confusion for your reader.
Be prepared to talk about it.
• A prospective employer may ask you questions about your writing sample during
an interview. Consider how you might explain your writing sample to an
employer in a few sentences.
• An employer may also ask you to consider if and/or how the analysis of your
sample would change based on new, changed or added facts. The more familiar
you are with your writing sample at the time of an interview, the more well-
equipped you will be to answer such questions.
4) Omissions and Redactions
Staying within the page range.
• Employers typically look for a 5 to 10-page writing sample.
• Consider omitting portions of the sample to keep it within the page range—do not
just delete the last few pages of the document. You may omit less important
sections of the document or you may omit a less controversial element or issue.
• If you omit less important sections such as the conclusion, issue presented,
statement of facts, and/or brief answer, ensure this information is clearly and
concisely presented to the reader in the cover page. This way, the reader knows
what the facts and issues are before jumping into the analysis.
• Another option is to concede or omit an issue from the memo entirely. For
example, if your document analyzes a three-part test, you might consider
conceding one of the prongs to shorten the sample. If you choose this option,
ensure the omitted facts or issues are left out of all other sections of the memo.
Permission and confidentiality.
• If the document was prepared for an internship or externship, ensure you receive
permission from your supervisor to use the piece as a writing sample, and redact
all confidential information.
• If you are submitting a writing sample from a real-life case or transaction, it is
important to remove the names of all parties and/or clients, any other sensitive or
confidential information, and any unique information that might give the reader
insight into who the parties were/are. Be cognizant, however, that including too
many “black boxes” that take the place of redacted information is not reader
friendly. If you begin having to redact more than half of the document, you may
consider choosing another writing sample.